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Posted 3.8.24
“Free delivery.”
“Subscribe for free.”
“Buy one, get one free.”
Yes, I’ll click or buy or subscribe! That’s the power of free — that magic four-letter word that moves readers to act. I read the word “free,” and I don’t want to miss out.
When you learn to use “free” in your content, you spur readers to download, give, buy, respond, engage, comment, sign up. It’s a powerful tool to have in your writing arsenal. And studies show us why.
It’s got to do with the phenomenon known as the “zero price effect.” Consumers place a disproportionate value on free items compared to those with even a small cost.
Behavioral economist Dan Ariely demonstrated this principle in his New York Times bestseller Predictably Irrational. He did so by using chocolate — Lindt truffles and Hershey Kisses, to be exact. In Dan’s experiment, he offered subjects a truffle for 15 cents (about half its actual cost) or a kiss for 1 cent. Nearly three out of four subjects chose the truffle. That’s a logical outcome, given the relative value of the two treats.
Then, Dan made a second offer: he reduced the price of each product by one cent. Subjects could buy a truffle for 14 cents, or they could choose the kiss for free. In other words, the difference in price between the two chocolates remained the same.
However, the results of the experiment were not. More than two-thirds of the subjects chose the free chocolate kiss over the bargain-priced truffle. And just to make sure the choice was not based on convenience — that is, not having 14 cents in change — Dan repeated the experiment in a cafeteria line, where the pennies were added to the subjects’ totals.
Free kisses still won.
For writers, the experiment shows us why the word “free” works.
Like other high-value power words — including you, because, and easy — “free” is persuasive. But …
“Free” is different because it persuades the reader to act. It lifts response.
Case in point: Burger King used the power of free to increase sales during its Scary Clown Night campaign. On Halloween 2017, the fast-food giant offered a free Whopper burger to any customer dressed as a clown. More than 110,000 clowns snapped up the sandwich at no cost. But rather than putting a dent in profits that day, Burger King’s receipts increased by 15%.
Even if your offer simply appears to be free — but has a non-monetary cost — it appeals to readers. The Journal of Marketing Research reported that consumers are just as likely to accept pseudo-free offers (such as completing a survey or providing your email address) as comparable truly free offers (with no costs).
Yep, it’s a power word. But if you toss about “free” too freely, you’ll diminish its impact. What are the best ways you can use this four-letter powerhouse to your advantage?
You can leverage the power of free by using other terms that mean the same thing — or nearly so.
Too much of a good thing isn’t a good thing. The word “free” can be a powerful tool, but not when you overuse it. Incorporate “free” strategically — for instance, when you have a download or eBook in exchange for a reader’s email address.
That way, your offer becomes irresistible. It’s free to the readers. And it’s priceless to you.
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